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Wake Up by =methylated-spirit:iconmethylated-spirit:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


This isn’t me
Can you see me
Inside
Beneath you
Underneath your skin
Give in
Scream with me
Baby

Let’s just lie
Together
Let’s just laugh
Until the world makes sense
Let’s just let go
Of our sins
Bleed
Free
Wake up
And catch me

Stay awake
Stay alive
Dance in the ashes
Empty faces
Fallen victory
The silence hurts
And let the chilled butterflies
And the voices
Of the dust angels
Take me

Save me
Away
See the hailstones falling
On the ground
Solid air falling around me
Stop my heart from beating
Wake up
And catch me
©2008-2009 =methylated-spirit
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~jeaimerroses Feb 29, 2008, 8:58:03 PM
LOVE IT :love: u should write a book... honestly

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=methylated-spirit Mar 1, 2008, 12:58:43 AM
strangely enough I have haha :)
many of these poems are from a story I've written
in poetry. I've been writing it for months :D

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It's here, in the sleeping drops, and uniforms of silk
~Karen Knight

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~jeaimerroses Mar 1, 2008, 6:47:02 AM
oh thats cool

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=methylated-spirit Mar 1, 2008, 4:29:23 PM
thnks :D

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It's here, in the sleeping drops, and uniforms of silk
~Karen Knight

Our wishes are for Bill

my band: [link]

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~Drowning-life Mar 5, 2008, 4:45:41 AM
im totally in love with your poems:heart:
you're good at this!!
xx

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~Tales from the Dark Side~

Focus on the pain,,
it's the only thing that's real<3

try to kill it all away
but I remember everything..
<3You lie until they've run out of questions
..
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=methylated-spirit Mar 5, 2008, 4:10:34 PM
aww thank you :hug:

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It's here, in the sleeping drops, and uniforms of silk
~Karen Knight

Our wishes are for Bill

my band: [link]

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*Aedammair-Feline Mar 25, 2008, 8:51:22 PM
Nice work! I love the chilled butterflies reference.... sounds so good in the stanza.

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I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
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=methylated-spirit Mar 26, 2008, 1:02:49 AM
thanks :D

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It's here, in the sleeping drops, and uniforms of silk
~Karen Knight

Our wishes are for Bill

my band: [link]

:bulletred::bulletpink::bulletorange::dummy::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:
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*Aedammair-Feline Mar 26, 2008, 11:20:26 PM
Thats ok :dance:

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
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