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Her lips
Fall into the
Curtain
Whispering to the light

His cold feet
Fall to the
Floor
He stands alone.

Lifeless hands hang,
Limp
To pale hips
As the blood seeps
Like a halo.
Staining skin
And bones.

Liquid heat
Melts wax paper
Wings
In a slow descent
Growing
Faster
With every heart’s beat.

Colour fades
From quiet skin,
Silenced.
As time moves
Effortlessly on

All have watched
Her fall from grace.
All have watched
Him falling from the
Sun.
©2008-2009 =methylated-spirit
:iconmethylated-spirit:

Author's Comments

A living dead girl and a human angel.
Icarus and Pandora.

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:iconaedammair-feline:
You have one spelling mistake I think.
You have written "decent" but I think it's meant to be "descent".
Other than that it's very good :)

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I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:iconmethylated-spirit:
I did too ^^
thanks for pointing that out :)

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:iconaedammair-feline:
Ha ha, that's ok.
I'll help where I can! :nod:

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:icontanafeyroyale:
Absolutely beautiful!

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When I close my eyes I can see / The spotlights are bright on you and me / We've got the floor / And you're in my arms / How could I ask for more?

"So She Dances"
Josh Groban
:iconmethylated-spirit:
thank you :hug: ^^

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It's here, in the sleeping drops, and uniforms of silk
~Karen Knight

Our wishes are for Bill

my band: [link]

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:iconohsostarryeyed:
so the writing itself is amazing, and then i read the comment, and it just pushes it over the edge.

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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconmethylated-spirit:
thanks so much :aww:

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It's here, in the sleeping drops, and uniforms of silk
~Karen Knight

Our wishes are for Bill

my band: [link]

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