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I felt her breathe
Across my skin
In gentle undertones.
She pressed her
Lips
Against a broken soul
Into damaged wrists
And fragile bones.

With a kiss,
She shaped my body
Beneath quiet, loving hands
With soft words in whisper
She tells me
She'll never understand.
:iconmethylated-spirit:

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:icondarkargent:
that soudns so awesome that makes me wanna be a nurse ro somethin lol XD

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Why don't any of us know how beautiful we really are?
:icontoaakatsuki:
:(

This is too awesome. I really like this one.

It's still kind of sad though.. in a way... *sigh*

:heart: :)

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The world is not beautiful; therefore it is. ~ Kino no Tabi

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~Amaranth-Portal
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:iconaedammair-feline:
This is beautiful Rhu.
It is soft and mellow - with deep emotional meaning.

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name....

:bulletpink: Rip your heart out at =RawEm0tion :bulletpink:
:iconvelar1:
For me, i express myself through photography, but i wish i had the ability to express myself in beautiful words like these, heartfelt and amazing !
:iconbloodstainaffiliate:
This is a very powerful peace. It's quite melancholic, but done beautifully. :)

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Silence is golden, but duct tape is silver!
:iconblackjack157:
The last lines are my aboloute favourite.

You ought to sell these poems dear honestly. :)

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Give me an evening, give me a night.
I'll show you the time of your life!

Subscribe to my youtube! :D: [link]
:iconohsostarryeyed:
i actually like the rhyme scheme in this, which surprised me [i normally detest rhymes] :heart:

'She pressed her
Lips
Against a broken soul
Into damaged wrists
And fragile bones.'

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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconkristinedrawstuff:
This is beautiful
I wish I could write like this
:iconemrose88:
When I read other's poetry, the one thing I have problem with is their flow... but this flows so well and it's beautifully written!

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Charlie Brown: Isn't there anyone who knows what Christmas is all about?
Linus Van Pelt: Sure, Charlie Brown, I can tell you what Christmas is all about...

Message me and I can tell you too. :)

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